GROWTHOPTIX — AD CREATIVE REVIEW

Script 1 · “The Ad Platform’s Dirty Secret” · founder-led ad. One variation per tab — review cut, not final color/captions. Updated Jun 10, 2026

Striped shirtOriginal VO pace60s
ARCHIVED — do not review. This first cut has a known mouth-sync defect and the delivery runs too fast. It is kept only for wardrobe/pace comparison. The current cut is on the V2 tab.

Full Cut

Segments

1 · Hook“Your Meta dashboard shows a 4:1 ROAS…”
2 · The Problem“They measure what they want to measure…”
3 · The Offer“Real ROAS in 7 days — $249/mo, no contracts.”
4 · How It Works“Connect, see the truth — real revenue per campaign.”
5 · The Mechanism“Verified conversions back to your ad accounts.”
6 · CTA“Click the link below and book a demo.”
Black shirtSlower, conversational paceRefined mouth sync64s
Your verdict on this cut:

Full Cut

⚡ Pace test (Paul's 1.25× suggestion): watch the 1.25× cut (51s) — if this pace is right, the next render bakes it in natively so motion stays natural.

Segments

1 · Hook“Your Meta dashboard shows a 4:1 ROAS…”
2 · The Problem“They measure what they want to measure…”
3 · The Offer“Real ROAS in 7 days — $249/mo, no contracts.”
4 · How It Works“Connect, see real revenue per campaign.”
5 · The Mechanism“Verified conversions back to the platforms.”
6 · CTA“Click the link below and book a demo.”
Everything you've asked for and where it stands. Submit a new script idea, a change request, or upload reference images/assets — the production team picks it up from here.

New Request

No file attached — logos, screenshots, reference images…

Iterate on the Ad

Edit any segment's script, pick pace and wardrobe, and submit. After a quick production sign-off we render one proof segment first — approve it and the rest renders automatically. Saves you waiting on a full cut that isn't right.

Work Items

CHANGE REQUESTS & FEEDBACK Goes straight to the production team — replies appear here.